Friday, August 6, 2010

August: Day Three

I'm trying to keep up. Doesn't look like I will. We'll see.



Know me well enough, and you will find out that I cannot resist a burger. This illustration doesn't even represent my ideal burger. My ideal burger would probably involve mushrooms and swiss.

This is probably most people's ideal burger.


Which burger do you think came out better? I like certain qualities of the first burger, but the second burger stands out more. Tell'em about it.
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3 comments:

  1. Giancarlo CorbachoAugust 6, 2010 at 4:27 AM

    Mmm, I'm hungry!

    The variation in line weights is really nice in the second one, but parts of it get a little heavy.

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  2. AnonymousAugust 6, 2010 at 6:18 AM

    I like Burger no. 1. The line quality on the first one is great, but then I do agree in the second.

    Maybe try dulling out the bkgd with a cooler wash and see what happens.

    Otherwise, both look quite appetizing.

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  3. NarcisoAugust 8, 2010 at 1:51 AM

    Thanks guys! I'll look into your suggestions.

    When I get a chance.

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